What a gorgeous picture that invites so much imagination! I'm judging this week, so my participation in the Flash! Friday contest is completely ineligible, but I couldn't resist at least posting an attempt at a story.
Story element to include: "A Fleeting Moment." Here's my attempt:
The End
You see the way it should have been.
The breath-taking portrait of
happily-ever-after
Shatters painfully beneath the
black-and-white photograph of what-is-now.
You
are my soulmate, you
should have said. You are the other half of
me.
But
the words hang empty, bereft of breath,
Deflated
before they are even uttered.
A
thousand reasons teeter on the edge of the silence,
Crowding
in, pressing my thoughts into a whirl
Of
panicked need.
It
takes only a moment,
One
second of shrinking courage,
One
fleeting gasp of meeting-eyes,
And it
is over.
All the excuses you could offer her,
She can foil with the other side.
For all your beginnings,
She can weave the ends.
The story is already written.
There is nothing left to do.
You should have had the courage to tell
her then.
But you didn't.
You should have begged.
But you didn't.
You should have done anything but what
you did.
Instead, you stare at her as she slowly
shakes her head.
When she turns from you,
You rotate the other way,
Two backs, facing each other,
Two directions, opposite sides of the
same picture.
Just . . .
Mirrored reflections in the rain.
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